(I'm not sure...)

Maveric trembled with fear

(how about first, she dips him under water, then she surounds him with fire, finally, she makes him feel the pain of having someone trying to kill you over and over aging???)
she returns with a painful looking tool

(That's a good idea!!)

Maveric tried to struggle against the restraints

they have little sliver spikes in them, he cuts himself on them
she wheels him over a pool of water
takes him off the thing, ties him to a pieces of rock and throws it in the water
he sinks to the bottem

(should she do a little on Alaric, his would start with sun light???)

(Yes!!!)

Maveric glubs, thrashing and trying not to drown

she starts walking over to Alaric
the cage is still open

(should Luna break through a wall, or should she enter through the entrance???)

(Either one is fine with me)

Alaric cowers in the corner

(then how about she breaks through the wall, saves Marvic, but has to go rescue Alaric who is at the entrance???)

she walks over and grabs him and starts dragging him over to a table

(Yess!! I say 'yes' a lot, don't I?)

Alaric gives a shout of surprise and yells, "Help me!"

(saying yes is a lot is fine, as long as you agree with what is being said)
she drags him to a table and ties him down to it
(should she torture Alaric in any other ways???)