Raven looked shocked, but that shock turned to genuine fear.. and then, her eyes twisted with a look of heartbreak as they glossed over with tears. She couldn't believe it.. Sawyer was right all this time.. Ash couldn't love.. " O-oh.. Alright, I am so sorry I bothered you Ash.. " Her voice was filled with sadness as she turned and walked away. Ian saw this all and told Raven that he paid for everything but.. Raven didn't react much. Just nodded and followed him in.


( Now we think when does Sawyer and Ash fight again and Raven saves Ash from death? Because I am not giving them a break )

(Soon. They could have little spars until it's go time for Raven)

Ash waited until Raven was inside. Seeing the heartbreak in her eyes caused him physical pain, and he realized that if he had to keep this up for much longer, he might actually make himself sick. He tried to go after her, but one of his friends grabbed his wrist and pulled him back, nodding towards a man on the other side of the street sitting on a bench.

" How am I not surprised... at all. "

( yeees, and can we make this even worse? What is Ash wasn't even allowed to see her after that- he wasn't allowed to help her either. What if Sawyer was waiting for something and if Ash had helped Raven the child would of lived? it would be extra painful since he finds out that child way his. )

Ian made Raven not think about it- telling her that Ash was a no good guy and to stay away from him and try to relax. Raven nodded. " Alright.. I will.. " She said in a soft voice. Ian led her to the back so they could enjoy their spa day in peace, silently cursing Ashes name. He hoped that he would get what he deserved.

(Perfect! And to top it off, I think I might actually make him suffer physically avatar of the pain of breaking Raven's heart, finding out he couldn't saved his child, etc.)

Ash's friends starte to give him the go around just to try and make him feel any better

( Make him get incredibly sick and he went out riding Bandit to try to get some fresh air.... Then he finds Raven near dead at the bottom of a cliff. )

" Raven.. You have to try and focus on good stuff. If you don't you will just continue to feel horrible. " Raven just nodded, not really paying attention as she just enjoyed her massage.

(Yess!!!!)

Ash could have rambled about Raven for the whole rest of the tour, but his friends were the ones that got to ramble this time. And nothing they were talking about seemed interesting.

Ian and Raven continued to talk, Ian trying to help Raven remain calm and to not panic.

...And then Ash and his entourage run into Sawyer. And Ash is just thinking, more like begging for him to just leave him alone. He was not in the mood right now

" So, Ray, when are you telling you dad? " Raven shuddered, " When I die. "