I do like the right one, but I just liked the way the left one looks with that Vul a bit better. I wish I were able to give you actually helpful feedback, but I'm not very good with explaining things.

Thank you! That sounds perfect! I'm looking forward to it!

Yeah, I'm sure.

Ohhh. (Y'know if you don't like it, it wont offend me. xD It's your opinion.) I'm fine trying to figure out what you mean if you would like to try. Remember, this is your commission, so anything you want changed, or little/big details you want added, I am fine doing. Nothing you say about what I make will hurt me, so if there is something you dislike, like, or want added, it wont affect me. I'm fine doing all the coloring and shading OVER again, if you want. (Example.) :)

M'kay! * scribbles in corner * SCRIBBLE SCRIBBLE SCRIBBLE

Alright.. Thank you

I know, if I didn't like something I'd say so. The two styles for the hands both look nice, but I feel like the one on the left looks better with the way the Vuls were drawn. (The Vuls are super cute, btw.)


*Excitedly sqeeing at screen while cat plots my death*

M'kay. Sorry. Thank you!


Evil cats... * throws catnip at you *

For some reason I had a hard time finding your request... xD

Anyways, on subject, I was practicing humans seeing as I have yours to do, and I really just need to do it. I ended up making some hair I was happy with.. and I wanted to get your opinion. To me, it looked a little like the girl in the pictures hair. Brush wise, at least. Now, I was playing with colors, so I'll send them all to you. They kind of differ in color and shade hardness, so that's my main point.

Main thing is the kinda.. dullness, darkness, etc. Even specific color, if you like one of the ones below. IF you want hair, for your girl, that is. Like hair under the hood. (Just take your current avi's hair as reference. Or one online that you liked.) It personally bothers me when some Sylesi head pieces take off the hair.. So if you want.

**Note- This drawing is just one I made at random to practice. Not your final thing, so no worries. You're getting your pose. xD




The strands of hair that fall over the face kind of look weird. Really, the whole thing does. If I used this type of dull-ness to it, I would have added more shading to those strands to make them pop out from the skin and not look so much like a cut out.


Seeing as these two had the brightness taken down a lot on them.. the shine isn't as apparent. So I would add a little shine/light to the brighter areas. Not too much though.


Same as the last picture, I'd probably give it a very soft/slight shine to the lighter areas.


And here is the original coloring, without any hue changing.

Now if you don't want any hair and just want the original avatar look.. then ignore all of this. FORGET IT WAS HEREEEEEEEEEE!! WoOoOoooooOooooooOOOOOOooO!!!! or if you don't like this style, I can work on a different look. (Shading, coloring, brush type.)


Also, do you still want your avatar that you posted done, or your new one? I could always change the serpent body to scale covered boots, or mix the two together. Even add clothing and etc that aren't in sylestia. (Ex - Hood with horns and hair) Just to make sure.


One last thing.. which one of the hairs looked better? Not counting the blue and pink two. I'm kind'a leaning towards the last one.. but I wanted your opinion. If none, what do you think should be kinda done? Like more lighting, softer black, sharper, etc.

I like the first one, above the blue.
I just uh need it
Really long.
And maybe not so messy xD

The new one please. And maybe a little blacker and dull lighting.

M'kay. So hair it is. owo

Long as in down to the butt? Kinda where long?

Also, do you want the pose to be exactly like the throne sitting one, or different?

Yep, butt is good.

You can pick whatever look would look good with her serpent tail.

Alright. Mind if I do a quick sketch of her looks/clothing before the clothes? It's free, of course. Just to kinda plan.

Sure sure

I'm super excited to see.