I stood back up, confused about what had just happened. It seemed I had much to learn about the predicament I was in. "Hello?" I called out, with a mix of curiosity and caution. All the came back to me was a faint echo. Sunlight filtered in from a hole in the ceiling. I looked around and decided to take a look at the markings. There were black and green wolf-like things hat seemed to move when I stared at them, but as I looked a little closer, I could see that they were just still paintings. I supposed the Wolf-things were Knowledgends. I noticed that they were running from something, and when I peered closer, I could see some had tears in their eyes, or they were wide with fear. Dark red footprints seemed to follow in their footsteps and some had large gashes running down their sides. I noticed one more thing though. They didn't have shadows. I looked around the wall and saw that below the earth the Knowledgends were running on, Dark beings seemed to reach upward while others held them back. Their claw marks showed desperation to reach the Knowlegends, but I couldn't tell whether or not it was maliciousness, or something else. I glanced over to the wall to where the 'chaser' was, but I couldn't tell what it was since it had large gashes through it's part of the wall.
The last thing was a small pool of water directly below the hole where the sunlight came in. looked in, only to see my reflection, but one thing bothered me even more. I saw Lore hovering above me, but his face was blurry, as if the pool couldn't focus in on his face. I found that the only thing I had inherited from my parents were a few markings.
Hidden's Reflection:
I gave one more look at the painting, but couldn't find anything, so I started to trot towards the exit of the cave when I heard a whisper. "W-wait!" A voice in my head said. "Go back, you didn't get the first piece!". "What piece?" I asked in annoyance of him not telling me earlier. "The dragon's blaze, w-what else?" He retorted, returning the annoyance I had given him. He let out a moan, which triggered my thought on where he was anyway. I didn't see him anywhere around.
"First of all, I'm in your head. I can hear any thoughts that you don't guard. Puh-lease d-don't tell me your f-father didn't tell you anything! Okay, I'll tell you the story...
Long ago, I grew tired of the war between... Well... You know who I'm talking about. I don't dare say his name lest he notice I am alive. Anyways, he did not like that I was simply tired of the war, and was intent on killing me- and everything else born from sin. So, to rid the earth of pure sin, he created two things: A new race, and a ruler for them. The race was to be called the Soundention. And their ruler was a dragon whose body could barely withstand the power it was given. The race was of the body of a zolnixi, but instead of a wisdemon, they have an Innosound, an angel of sorts. When I was confronted by the dragon, I had a vain, rash vessel who was reckless with his life and soul. I was only able to shatter the dragon into pieces, not truly slay it. In the end, I was also greatly wounded, and went into a great sleep. The race of Soundention are still around to this day though. They live to hunt down the race of Knowledgends, so we have to collect the pieces of dragon to prevent it's rebirth. The Sounds are looking for it, and we must hurry."
Man, sorry I've been super busy lately. Sorry I wasn't able to update last week :( Let me know what you think of this week's update ^^
Edited By LostCry on 7/2/2016 at 2:21 PM.
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I sighed and asked, "Could you guide me to this 'Dragon's blaze' then, please?" I heard a sound of acknowledgement in my head and he said, "put your head and p-paws into that pool we passed by." I was a little bewildered at the thought of putting my head in the pool, but a lot of weird things had happened today, so I complied. To my surprise, the pool was actually the perfect temperature. My paws felt nice in the water and I looked at the fur float around loosely on my legs. I took a deep breath and dunked my head in, but I was surprised to see that I could breathe in it. I opened my eyes to see some sort of rune on the ground beneath the water that was not visible from the surface, even though it appeared to be on fire. Before I could start thinking about how it was possible for something to burn underwater, Lore said "Go on, touch it." I did as he said and leaned my nose down to the flame, finding it wasn't hot. As soon as I touched the rune though, my body felt as though it was being burned alive. I screamed in pain, but no sound came out, being underwater. I could hear Lore shouting something in my head, trying to console me, but how could anything be okay at this time? Suddenly, the pain disappeared into my legs, which then also stopped hurting. I backed out of the water and collapsed for awhile. "Sorry, I wasn't ready to receive such power so quickly. I won't let it hurt n-nearly as much next time." I groaned at the thought of next time, but didn't say anything while breathing heavily, in shock from the immense pain.
Once I was done resting, I slowly stood back up, but found that the pain was completely gone. As I stood before the pool again, I looked down at my reflection one more time. Shock hit me like a tidal wave when I looked down to see that markings that looked like flames and smoke had taken over the lower portion of my body.
Hidden's reflection:
"Let's go. We h-have the first p-piece now, so w should hurry t-to get the n-next one :The Dragon's Sky.
Hey guys, just got done with part 5! I hope all of you are enjoying, and PLEASE remember to leave what you think ^^ I helps me know whether or not people are enjoying it or not. Constructive criticism also is a huge help!
Willowbark
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Posted: 7/8/2016 at 2:17 PM
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Good job! I like it :)
LostCry
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Posted: 7/8/2016 at 2:19 PM
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thanks ^^
Jade07
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Posted: 7/9/2016 at 4:42 PM
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wow great i have not ben on yasterday but that was cool mind if i make a story with an adventherus consepit like yours and ping you too acluy ping in 1 i mad i thing you will like
LostCry
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Posted: 7/9/2016 at 4:50 PM
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No thanks, I don't need a ping, but I guess you can write your own story on a different thread. Just don't copy mine ^^
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Posted: 8/7/2016 at 1:27 PM
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I love it! And that's coming from me! I'm SUPER picky when it comes to books.
Edited By Cakedragon33 on 8/7/2016 at 1:28 PM.
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