Could you try to find some better faults? Whether or not people are scared by your character is their choice, not something you can control, and pretty much everyone is going to be angry at the scientists.
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Posted: 3/9/2013 at 2:02 PM
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You have to do that yourself. You're in charge of making your own character
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Okay, here are some;
- He is not confident in most things, such as friends, or believing in yourself, and thinks happy endings only exist in story books. (This will get better)
- Because of the tiger mutation, his consciousness may flick off and he will act like a tiger, and might attack his comrades.
- At times, emotions may get the best of him.
Oh yes! I forgot to include this in the appearance; His mutation was a bit off, as a whisker on his right is shorter than the rest and interferes with battling at times.
...0_0 XD Are these good?
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Posted: 3/9/2013 at 2:19 PM
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These make more sense at least, however, in your paragraph you godmodded (made the other characters act scared, regardless of what other players would have actually had their characters do). I also found it hard to understand many of the things you said. The other thing is you have flaws, yes, but they do not balance out the things your character is good at. What is he bad at? Pessimism is a flaw, and not having total control over instincts is good too, but how is he good with machinery if he doesn't remember his past? You have to have a lot of prior knowledge of how things work, or be an insane supergenious like Nikola Tesla to be able to figure out complex machines like cars without any knowledge of how they work.
Also please don't keep secrets from the mods, if you are going to do this "You'll understand later on after I play his role. [Big smile] ", then please explain what you are talking about, if not in your character sheet, then in a message to both snowpelt and me.
Oh and whiskers do small things for cats, like helping them know if they can fit through doors, but having uneven whiskers would not make him bad at fighting, especially if you've already said he is good at it.
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Um... what do you mean by that?
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Does that mean you still want to join, or not?
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