"Yeah maybe," she said feeling very nervous and scared.
She landed in the middle of camp.
"You first."

Eclipse took a deep breath, steeling himself. "I'll be beside you, but they don't know me or my voice. I would only put them on further edge. You try."

(Should they be there?)
Owl gulped then headed to the entrance to the den.
"You'll stay beside me right," she said pressing her pelt against his.

(How about only a few young ones did...They all are still asleep though, and few scavengers that are left are raiding it...That sound fine?)
Eclipse pressed into her, trying to comfort her and him at the same time. He wondered if she could somehow see through his facade and tell he was a worried. "Of course. I don't think I could spend ten minutes away from you."

Owl walked in then gasped.
"Where is everyone," she looks around, shocked.

"Um, are those raccoons?" Eclipse pointed to the two raccoons, hissing and scratching each other over a dead bird. "I think we should leave them alone. Are there usually other animals in here?" He hesitantly put one paw in front of the other.

"No," she said quietly shifting nervously.

(So, we're going with my tiny part about only a couple?)
Eclipse shuddered, and accidentally stepped on a tail. "Was that your tail?"
(Maybe a dead guys tail...or yours depends on what you want to. ;p)

Owl jumped as he stepped on her tail, she tripped over something. She looked at it and fluffed up her fur, terrified. It was a dead wolf.

"Sorry." Eclipse stumbled forward and found another dead wolf. "Um...Did you plan on a massacre? I think they may all be..."

"Who's there?" The voice sounded quiet gruff for the age of the wolf. Solarflare walked halfway into the light. "If you aren't part of our pack, I suggest you leave. Scavenger's are the worst at this time. Leave...please." The last word was obviously a plea.