(Yesss!!)

The boys search for a way to get her out

the nurse finishes with the gaurds
she also punches strait through the glass

(should it happen during school, after school, or before school. also, how do they trap her this time. they kid nap Alaric and she is captured when she goes to rescue him???)

(Yess!! And it should happen during school.)

Both the guys are astonished at the nurse

(the ending should be with them in detion after missing so much school to save Luna and the world, then we make the sequel)

Luna woke up, but is still stuck in the pod, she looks to be in a lot of pain
the nurse collapsed
the two look the axact same

(Yess...)

It hit Mav first, and he wondered if they were related in any way

(joking, we would just continu from this. but we would have to add some new problems.)

Luna is stuggling around trying to get free
she is looking at them then at a key pad

(Yeah...maybe now they're not just going after Luna? Like they're bent on killing the boys first?)

They notice and ask, "What's the code?"

the nurse gets up and types in the code
(1234)
the pod opens, now they need to undo the chains

(not kill, capture, then use them for who knows what. we could make one of them a tamer too, that would mean that both of them would be hunted. also Should the nurse be Luna's twin, or a pass tamer there to teach Luna what is what???)

The duo rushes in to try and get the chains off

(Yes and also I say a past tamer)

(should she be a pass tamer that is also related???)

the seccond she's free she runs over and starts yelling at the nurse
"Lora, what where you thinking, also how many people did you take there?''
Lora just roles her eyes
''here we go aging''