I was shocked at the boy's reaction. He seemed to know I was here. Hello? I whisper softly Can you... see me?

Sean glanced a bit from under his hood at you,faint confusion lining his shame. "Y-yes." He said just as softly,clearly shy.

(I am sad that your character is shy. I was hoping he'd be more... vibrant. Imma change Luka so he matches better, unless you want to change sean)
I hop up shocked. The window next to the boy was open, so I hop out and roll down the road. Angel sighs and hops out next to me.

(I could change Sean if you want.Like what I'll put wont be something he'd do before)

Sean saw you jump out and his heart almost stopped with shock. He stood up quickly,his hood dropping fully back with a shift of his back of his jacket because of his wings hidden,and he dashed up the driver. "Wait! I-I need to get out!" He said,his emotions a strong fright and worry that forced his choker to pulse brightly and fiercely.

I saw the boy become frantic on the inside of the bus. I shifted to the next bus stop and waited for the boy there.

As soon as the bus driver stopped at the bus stop Sean went out the door,tho his frail stature wabbling a bit as he landed,and he turned and jogged up to you,worry churning in his stomach and making his wings twitch under his jacket. "A-are you o-okay? You j-just....j-just J-Jumped out!"

I roll my eyes. Of course I'm fine, I say. I jerkily reach over and grab his arm. My hand sticks firm. He's not human Angel says, from the ground, shocked.

His eyes go wide as you grab him and he flinches,as if having been grabbed before but only to be hurt,and his emotions turned to automatic fear,drowning out his other emotions.

Note that for my characters Italics is speech and bolded italics are thoughts
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I felt the fear radiating off of him in waves. I wanted to make him not scared, but I didn't know how. Welp, I thought, He's not a bad-looking guy. I gently move my hand from his arm to the side of his face to cup his cheek. I lean over and gently brush my lips against his, trying to put as much calamity into the kiss as I can. See? I say. Not that scary.

Okie dokie ^w^ I use "" for speech and ' ' for thought.)

Shock ripples through Sean and his cheeks suddenly turn a bright golden of a blush and his heart rate sky rocketed,causing his choker's pulse to softly flicker just as aggressively as his heart pounded.
But the shock was mixed with a sort of feeling inside of him that became warm bubbles of sorts,and the night black of his hair swirled like ink in water but it didn't fade or dissipate.