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Chapter 4 - The Hunter

A flash of light. A small chuckle. An angel face. A small "goodbye". Blood. Lots of it. A limp body drops from a rooftop. Rosary had never wanted to live this life. Force. Pain. Days of pain, burning. Then she became a monster of the night. Everyone was attracted to her. Her smell. Her beauty. Her personality. Her talent. Her figure. Her popularity. Her kindness. She hated it all. She was made to kill. Her swiftness. Her strength. And she had this special ability to control people. They called it bloodbending, her kind. She could make her prey slowly pad over to her as she prepares her razor-sharp teeth and claws and strikes. She laughs while doing so. Not laughing at the stupidity of the prey. Her miserable life of death. Never aging. Stuck. Frozen. She had two sisters and a brother and a mother and father of her kind. Blood drinkers. Her sister, Alice, can sense where the person she looks at is going to step next, so it makes her combat abilities exceptional. Jakob, Alice's partner (they were adoptive siblings, not related) could control minds, make them think differently or hallucinate. Alec could control the weather. Bring down thousands of lightning bolts with just his command. And his partner, Jade, could make someone feel pain. Hard pain. Her adoptive parents, Miniala and Williard had the same ability; protection. They were called shields. They could extend energy out to the person they are focusing on to protect from any abilities their kind had. There were bigger clans than her family's but not more powerful. They were all in sync. They even had matching flowers pinned on them. Perfectly in sync. Or so she thought.

Alec and Jade:


Jakob and Alice:


Williard and Miniala:


Rosary:

Chapter 5: Well, Maybe Not Monsters, They Prefer "Violent Protectors"...

Rosary had always thought her self of worthless, a good for nothing monster whose only talent was killing. She had tried to burn, the only way she could die, before, but her family held her back. While she was the most intelligent of the family, she was not the strongest. Her family padded along with her to the place where she had seen a lonely Zolnixi and Lupora, together. She had at first thought they were friends, but in the time of her spying, she had noticed some suggestive body language and facial expressions. Smiles here and there for no reason, stirring when on gets closer to another, staring at one another for minutes at a time. It was... weird. She had never dreamt of crossbreeding. Especially with the Boltiance Family around. The Boltiance Family was a large, powerful group of her kind, each having their own ability. They wore robes of silk ranging from bright red to black. Black was the highest rank. The leader was of the name of Gardenia, a quite attractive leader. Her two "children", Edward and Jasper, wore cloaks of just lighter than hers. Then, her sister and brother, Carlisle and Esme, had dark grey cloaks. (Yes I am obsessed with Twilight, no you can't make me change the names.) They wore elegant smiles upon their face but had hearts of ice, maybe literally. Despite them keeping peace to their country, England, they would not tolerate and crossbreeding of any kind, with the dangers of a new vicious disease being spread or a new terrorizing species being born. They did their job well. TOO well.

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