Overall, pretty good, but you're missing something
Zeo
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The Kind-Hearted
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Posted: 2/20/2013 at 5:08 PM
Post #12
Quote From:
Originally Posted: 3/6/2026 at 8:04:37pm
Name: Rio (Last name unknown) known as Jacket to the other experiments
Username: Zeo
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Experiment number (must be 7 digits): 0127563
Type of Experiment (animal or technological): Animal
Description of changes due to experiment: He has fur over most of his body except for the mid section of the front of his body, and his face which has fox like features still resembles that of a regular person. He's ears have changed from human ears to point fox ears that now now rest near the top of his head covered by his unaturally white hair. He has white fur on most of his body except for the black fur on his arms and legs as well as the black stripes on his new bushy fox tail. He also has a black mark on his face that goes around his now silver eyes. The palms of his his hands, and the soles of his fox like feet are now padded, and have long sharp nails on them.
Character’s Appearance(or a picture): He looks like anthro(Zolnixi) fox wearing torn black jeans, and a red shirt under a special black straight jacket made specifically to hold him.
Description of Personality: He's does trust anyone, and appears to be a cold hearted savage who'll attack anyone who'll attack anyone near him. However that's not who his really is it's just who he became after the scientist changed him when he was a child using Dna from his beloved fox cub who this dissected to extract specific genes. The experience broke him, and made something inside him snap turning him into a the monster that everyone knows him as in the lab.
What is your character good at: He's a clever escape artist which is another reason for the straight jacket that has to wear. He's a great fighter, and knows how to ration his food so that he doesn't become weak like the others.
What are some faults and fears: He's broken, and afraid to let anyone get close so he pushes everyone away. He is impulsive sometimes letting his emotions get the best of him often resulting in fight with other experiments. He is hated, and untrusted by the others because his out of control behavior. There is even a rumor going around that he slaughtered his cellmate.
Example paragraph (Basically show us how you rp, you can also make that your introduction upon waking up in the cage room): "Huh what going on where am I," asked an afraid, and confused Rio waking up from a drug induced sleep. He tried to get up, but fell flat on his face hitting the cold hard floor with a loud THUMP. "What happ...Aaahhh...what happened to me?" he asked in a panicked voice as he got a look at his new fur covered legs attached to fox like feet. A strange man in a white lab coat came over to him, and said, "You've been reborn with some help from you little friend..."
Anything else you want to say?: He was an orphan()
I fixed it sorry it was really early in the morning when I posted it. At least over here anyway.
Edited By on 2/20/2013 at 10:38 PM.
Xsnowpeltx
Level 16
Joined: 2/9/2013
Threads: 1
Posts: 23
Posted: 2/20/2013 at 5:25 PM
Post #13
You're accepted!
Domby
Level 60
Joined: 1/30/2013
Threads: 46
Posts: 369
Posted: 2/20/2013 at 9:42 PM
Post #14
Name: Shanali (can go by Sha or Li)
Username: domby
Age: 16
Gender: female
Experiment number (must be 7 digits): 0000183
Type of Experiment (animal or technological): animal
Description of changes due to experiment:
Shanali is covered in a fine layer of white fur. Her skin, much like that of a polar bear, is black (no, not brown, black as pitch). She has a small stub of a tail, but that is rarely seen.
Character’s Appearance(or a picture): Shanali is tall, reaching 5'11 when she stretches to her full height (which is rare, because she is accustomed to slouching), and incredibly skinny, with a concave stomach and boney body. Her eyes are brown, with flecks of green, and are often slitted in anger. Her face is incredibly shrunken in, with hollowed cheeks and sunk in eyes. Her finger nails are ragged and worn from constant biting, and her hair billows around her head in an unkempt mass of greasy curls.
Description of Personality: Shanali is 75% anger and 25% protective. She hates the people that have locked her up and do experiments on her, but even more so she hates them for hurting her friends and the young ones that she wishes she could help. She cannot stomach screams of others pain, even as she handles the pain that is inflicted on her without wincing. She is the picture of stoicism, rarely revealing any of her emotions, except at night where she cries for the babies and toddlers she wants to help, but cannot. Arrogant, but not self centered, Shanali tends to prefer the company of the little ones while avoiding those her own age (particularly those of the opposite sex).
What is your character good at: tending to young ones, being protective, being angry
What are some faults and fears: She is terrified that her friends will die. Her anger often goes out of control. She can be reclusive when she is forced to deal with huge numbers of people.
Example paragraph: She could kill for a bath. No, honestly. She reeked. Her hair was greasy and frizzy and out of control, her skin felt like it was caked with dirt and grime. She longed to shower off the uncleanliness, just as she longed to escape this hell. She would trade freedom for a bath, if she had it. That was how badly she wanted a bath. Since she couldn't have a bath, however, she sat up and reclined against the cool bars of her cage.
"Once upon a time," she whispered to herself, "there was a girl who didn't listen to her parents and went walking around the city at night. Once upon a time..." she trailed off. Oh god, were those footsteps? She held her breath, praying that they walked past her, praying that they didn't. She heard them stop at the cage next to her, heard them pull a shrieking 7-year-old out of a cage, heard them carry her away. Then the screams.
Tears streamed down her face as she uselessly gripped the bars, wishing she could escape.
Anything else you want to say?:
Edited By on 2/22/2013 at 9:12 PM.
Crow
Level 40
Joined: 2/9/2013
Threads: 1
Posts: 21
Posted: 2/20/2013 at 9:53 PM
Post #15
Wonderful! But there's something missing
*wink wonk*
*I'm a dork*
Domby
Level 60
Joined: 1/30/2013
Threads: 46
Posts: 369
Posted: 2/22/2013 at 8:27 AM
Post #16
It's been added. My apologies.
Xsnowpeltx
Level 16
Joined: 2/9/2013
Threads: 1
Posts: 23
Posted: 2/22/2013 at 6:48 PM
Post #17
You're in!
Zeo
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 1/21/2013
Threads: 96
Posts: 850
Posted: 3/8/2013 at 11:46 PM
Post #18
@Crow
Are we waiting for more Rpers before this thread officially starts?
Crow
Level 40
Joined: 2/9/2013
Threads: 1
Posts: 21
Posted: 3/9/2013 at 12:39 PM
Post #19
We are waiting for one person in specific who requested we wait until he could put up his character. It's been quite a long time since he contacted me, and snowpelt and I are pretty sure we're going to just start without them. I'm going to send him a message and if he doesn't respond by tomorrow we will start without him.
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Posted: 3/9/2013 at 1:45 PM
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