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Articu
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 7:32 AM
Post #111
added ^^ there is a contest going on, if you'd like to join. it is linked on the first post~
Sairento
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 2:04 PM
Post #112
Tigerstar
Q. Can we do Scourge?
Scourge
Edited By Sairento on 11/10/2018 at 3:12 PM.
Articu
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 2:53 PM
Post #113
he's technically a leader, so i don't see why not
Dracornpotato
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 8:47 PM
Post #114
The prologue is awesome, and your designs are beautiful. Very descriptive. The first sentence:
"Two dark shapes pelted over the open moorland"
I suggest using a different word than pelted, since it doesn't make very much sense. Pelted means to be hit very hard with something. I see what you were trying to say though. Maybe use something like "darted" or "dashed" or perhaps shot, galloped, bolted, or scrambled to describe their manner.
Articu
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 8:51 PM
Post #115
"pelted" is a term used in the books for running, if i remember right :P so i used it here. but i'll double-check, and change it if that's the case. thank you for the heads-up, though~ chapter one is about halfway done, by the way~
Dracornpotato
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 8:52 PM
Post #116
Ah. Another fault of me not yet having read the books. Shame shame shame. Well, I can't wait to read it!
Articu
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 8:58 PM
Post #117
edit that i didn't add to the last post because you had already replied xD (definition of pelt, according to dictionary.com, used as a verb without an object):
to hurry
Moonia
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 9:02 PM
Post #118
Username:Dragonjammer31
Books Read: 0
Books Owned: 0
Favorite Book: Into the Wild (( mmmmmmmmm I found dos series on Internet ))
Favorite Characters: FireStar,RavenClaw,GreyStripe,SilverStream
Least Favorite Characters: TIGERCLAW AND NO OTHERS
Preferred Clan: ThunderClan
OCs: (( What I thought I would say: "God really? Whelp let's look through scratch!" )) WillowStar,RavenStar, CrowPaw. Don't worry child I have 1 million more XD
OC Description: NOPENOPENOPENONONONONONO
Other:TOMATERS, DOUGHNUTS, SQUISHY BANANANAMNANANANAS AND THE GELL OF THE JONES
Ping List?:YEP
Edited By Moonia on 11/7/2018 at 9:02 PM.
Articu
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 9:07 PM
Post #119
added, and welcome ^^ there is a contest going on right now, if you'd like to join. it's linked on the first post :)
Dracornpotato
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Posted: 11/7/2018 at 9:19 PM
Post #120
You learn something new every day.
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