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Vaingel
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Posted: 10/10/2019 at 8:33 PM
Post #1
I'm not the only one who think's poetry is art... right?
If so, I guess this'll just be moved to the writing forum or something.
So I'll just be posting some poems I wrote.
Feel free to talk to me or anyone else if you want.
These are gonna be free-verse because conformity to patterns and schemes is useless for my ideas.
Hope you like them-
Also, if you happen to be crazy enough to want to read these, I guess I can ping you when I get a new one. First few I already wrote, so I'm just copy-pasting those from somewhere else (to explain short time span).
Vaingel
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Posted: 10/10/2019 at 8:36 PM
Post #2
This first one is pretty long, but I like it ;-;
Too Late
A girl and a boy
Sit together
No older than eight
Looking
Contentedly
At a distant field
Littered with stones.
The girl says:
"No one knows
How I feel
And I hate it.
My mommy
And daddy
Got a divorce
And now
Everything's gone
Wrong."
And she continues
To tell the boy
How everyone
Asks
Which parent she likes
Best
As if she could love
One
More than another.
She sees them both
Every other week
And gives them little gifts
On mother's
And Father's Day
Shakily hand-made
But sometimes having to wait
A week
Before giving it to them
Late
And tattered.
She never goes on
Vacations
Out of fear
That one parent
Will feel more loved
Than the other.
She points to a distant mountain
And says:
"That's where my daddy lives."
She points to the nearby valley.
"And that's where my mommy lives."
The boy nods,
Understandingly.
He says,
Calmly,
Serenely:
"I've heard
There are others
Out there.
Kids like
me.
I've lived with
My grandparents
For three years now.
They're nice,
But
They don't
Understand
The way a parent does.
In the end,
I'm just
Happy
They try."
He tells the girl
About the
Other students
Calling him
'lucky'
Because
All they know of their grandparents
Is cookies
Cold milk
And a fireplace
And his friends
Leaving him behind
Because
They didn't
Understand
Why the teachers treated him
Differently.
He gives his
Mother's Day and Father's Day gifts
To people who received them
Years beforehand
And he crosses out
The 'Mother' and 'Father'
Inked on them by
An uncaring printer
Mocking his situation.
He goes on vacations
But doesn't feel the homesickness
Because he's felt it
For years
And now
He feels
Nothing.
He points to the rocky field.
"My parents live there. I visit them sometimes."
He stands, dusting off his dirty hands.
"The doctor says
I'll see them real soon."
And he leaves
Without another word between them.
The girl stares at the rocks
Says:
"At least your parents are together"
And cries.
Vaingel
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Posted: 10/10/2019 at 8:37 PM
Post #3
I'm never gonna explain any of the imagery in these, by the way, just a heads up-
Stars
I counted stars
And pulled them from the sky.
I carried them with me
And even in the darkest moments
I had them
To hold on to.
They were everything to me
The only things in the world
That could bring me hope.
I showed them to others
To make them laugh.
Even if the stars weren't funny to me,
I knew others would laugh
And I like seeing people
Happy.
I showed them to the people
I trusted most.
They called me naive.
They told me stars couldn't give you anything.
They took my stars
And threw them into the wind.
They are scattered in the world.
I know I'll never find them
But at least I get to see them
When I sleep.
Maybe they'll come back to me
The last time I ever sleep.
Vaingel
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Posted: 10/10/2019 at 8:38 PM
Post #4
Supposed to all be in lowercase, I promise-
My People
some stand among the gamers and say to the world
these are my people
some stand among the nerds and say to the world
these are my people
some stand with the workers and say to the world
these are my people
some stand with the depressed and say to the world
these are my people
some stand with the crazy people and say to the world
these are my people
some stand alone out in the cold of the night and say they have no one
and finally find someone out with them and hold on to them and say
you are all i have
these are all people
who deserve the highest respect
just like everyone else
hello world
these are my people
Vaingel
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Posted: 10/10/2019 at 8:40 PM
Post #5
No punctuation for the OCD-ridden-
Smile
The strongest people
Are the ones who laugh when they want to cry
And ignore their own pain to comfort others
They put bandages on scrapes
With their bleeding hands
And say everything will be okay
Regardless of whether they believe it themselves or not
And wipe the tears from the eyes of the lonely
Encouraging them to try again
Knowing when their eyes are dry and they find someone new
They'll only be consumed by darkness once more
But are okay with all of this
And don't complain
Because they know the pain
And all they want is for others to not have to go through it alone
Like they have to
They don't even expect a thank-you
Because no one really notices
But the smile on their faces
Is payment enough
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