(This is a love story, despite the title. And feedback is always welcomed!)

This is Moonshine. Her dad died when she was young. She didnt have any siblings, just a best friend. Her best friends name is Crazy Spirit. Moonshines dad looked like this, before he died. When her dad died, it was hard on the whole family. Her mom, on the other hand, took the death more serious than anybody else. Her father always had a hatred for this family:

Evil Rainbow, the son:

And Sky the sister.

Their parents died a long time ago.

Chapter 1
The Meet

Moonshine was looking out her window of her home when she saw Crazy Spirit come. She trotted out to meet her. Hi, Moonshine! Hows it goin?
Meh. Its pretty boring. Mom found a new mate. His name is Twilight Sky. He8s Nice, but...hes not dad... Moonshine looked at the grass.

(This is Twilight Sky:
Dragon horse:
)

Crazy Spirit looked at her sadly. Sorry for asking, Moon.
Its fine, Spirit. Lets just go. They started trotting to a fair. At the fair, they were supposed to have fun, but Moonshiner had a bad feeling about it.....When they got there, Crazy Spirit saw Dragon Horse. She squealed. She had had a major crush on him for...like...ever. But there was another Qitari that she hadnt seen in forever...All of a sudden, Spirit neighed excitedly. Oh my god! Theres Evil Rainbow! Hes so hot!
Moon rolled her eyes. Whatever, Spirit
Spirit nudged her. Ah come on, Moonshine. You know you like him.
No, Spirit. You like him. Not me. You have had a crush on him even before he moved. Thats kinda big.
Spirit blushed. Okay, fine. You have me. We should go talk to him, Moon!
Moon shook her head. We cant. My mom will kill me. You know that our families hate each other, Spirit...
Spirit started to beg. Moon gave in. Fine, but you owe me.
Anything!