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Dragondawn
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Posted: 7/3/2013 at 9:00 PM
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Warning: some of these poems are a bit darkish-ish..... but i'm always happy when I write these
most of the time when I'm writing these poems its usually in song format so it might not sound right to you
course...these poems are influenced by a song I'm listening to....
Poem 1
Title: Alive
influenced by: Bleach Awake and Alive The world turns for me no more
I'm asleep yet I'm awake
Yet the world turns no more....
I'm Awake I'm Alive yet I lie on broken grounds
For the world turns no more....
I lay, broken yet fixed...Why it that?
For me, the world turns no more...
I'm Awake I'm Alive yet I lie on broken grounds
For me the world turns no more....
My heart is beating fast yet it is slow
My limbs are heavy yet they are light
I'm Awake I'm Alive yet I lie on broken grounds
my soul is dead yet I am alive.....
I'm Awake I'm Alive yet I lie on broken grounds
Yet the world turns for me no more
More to come. feel free to post your thoughts, or any questions you might have. I'm just a ping away
Edited By on 8/9/2013 at 3:20 PM.
Blueloverw
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Posted: 9/17/2013 at 2:01 AM
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@dragondawn
cool i like it your good
Dragondawn
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Posted: 11/29/2013 at 4:02 PM
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thank you ^_^
sorry it took so long
forgot about this thread
Morrow
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Posted: 11/29/2013 at 4:53 PM
Post #4
Like your poem! I wish this whole other fiction thing was used more, though. It's funny, most of my poems are also in song format and are really dark whereas I'm a pretty happy person. xD
Dragondawn
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Posted: 11/29/2013 at 6:01 PM
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same with me! They randomly come to me. one time I thought of a poem while in the shower. XD Its somewhere in my computer... or I deleted it...I don't know what happened to it... oh well Find some lose some X)
Morrow
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Posted: 11/29/2013 at 6:20 PM
Post #6
Yeah, poems are weird like that, most of mine are written during math class xD I wish more people would read this thing, though, a lot of these poems and stories are good...would you mind reading my poem? I would appreciate some feedback.
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