Dundee had suggested this as a way to describe the Mafia in a forum post and I really like the concept idea, so I decided to write it.
The concept was that brilliantly colored creatures started to appear in our world, throwing everyone in a tizzy. Cities fell and governments collapsed. Only a small group of people learned knew how to capture and control these creatures, allowing them to establish order in a lawless world. A group of these individuals banded together and formed the Mafia, under the guidance of the Don. The Mafia has managed to capture a few cities and rebuild them for human living, helping those in need.
I'm not sure whether to start with how the Mafia came to power or what they do after they have that power. I have ideas/storylines for both, so tell me what all of you guys prefer!
Edited By on 6/13/2013 at 5:04 AM.
Flute
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Posted: 6/12/2013 at 1:25 AM
Post #2
Ping up Starfall and Sylvette, they're pretty prominent about it (if we're still alive, I'm taking a bit of a summer break trying to get my act together before coming back to chat lol). And also ask the rest of the mafia their ideas. c: (Wonder if Jack has any lolol (sorry if I missed anyone orz!!))
You should totally keep my role under wraps. Make me a character in the background that no one knows is a don.
As for everyone else, I think it would be awesome for everyone to have a sort of personalized chapter that is about them. A chapter for each member and how they contribute to the mafia. And once you hit up the major members (the more talkative ones where you have a good feel for their personality), you can make several chapters of how the mafia together work to better the society.
...Maybe I'm getting a little ahead of myself lol. Sorry. >//< Do ask the others though~
Also, if anyone wants to join us, do let me know. 8D;; Or maybe I should relinquish recruiting roles to others, haha.
Bella1988
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Posted: 6/12/2013 at 6:25 PM
Post #3
@Flute,
I may do personalized chapters, but I was planning on it being more of a cohesive story than a series of vignettes. I do like the idea, though, so I'll see if I can work it in.
@Jackfarcry, @Sylvette, @Starfall2466,
What do you guys think?
Dundee
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Posted: 6/13/2013 at 1:13 AM
Post #4
omg I remember this plot heeheeheeheehee
I think it'd be cool if you had a central story going on, and then various members could just contribute their own little mini chapters? idk this is just awesome in general hgafkdljfds
Edited By on 6/13/2013 at 1:14 AM.
Bella1988
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Posted: 6/13/2013 at 5:02 AM
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@Dundee,
YES! Sorry, I didn't remember exactly where I read it or that you had come up with the concept, otherwise, I would have given you credit for it in the beginning. Fixing it now.
Starfall
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Posted: 6/13/2013 at 8:41 PM
Post #6
@Bella1988, Strange...for some reason, I received no ping omo And I do like the idea! OuO/
Sylvette
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Posted: 6/14/2013 at 7:51 AM
Post #7
lol I didn't get a ping too XD
But it's no problemo As long as I'll forever be the Ninja Bunny of doom!!! O3O/
Die by cuteness!!! >3<
Edit: Mini Chapters MINI CHAPTERS MINI OMG I LOVE IT!! OWO ME WANT!!! LUV UR IDEA!! KYAAAA~~~~
Edited By on 6/14/2013 at 7:52 AM.
Bella1988
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Posted: 6/14/2013 at 1:23 PM
Post #8
OK, mini-chapters it is. I'll start "post-apocalypse" with..... @Dundee, because she's the one who came up with the idea. Dundee, I'll send you the mini-chap before posting so that you can OK it.
Dundee
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Posted: 6/14/2013 at 7:16 PM
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*VIBRATES WITH EXCITEMENT*
Starfall
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Posted: 7/23/2013 at 10:14 PM
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ERMAHGAWWWD WHAT ISH HAPPENINGGGGG
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