The book will be about warriors. A tribe of rushing water cat comes to the clans for help. Her tribe has been wiped out by a wolf attack and the clan lets her join. NOW, WHAT FOR CHAPTER 1?

Here's what I got so far:


DawnClan
Leader: Ashstar: A grey tom with black spots on his tail with Purple eyes
Medicine cat: Batflight: A black, brown, and white tom with blue eyes
Deputy: Sunstrike: A golden tabby she-cat with brown eyes
Warriors:
Skunktail: A Black and white tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Brokenpath: A golden and black tabby tom with a single red paw and amber eyes
PantherLeap: A Black tom with amber eyes
Apprentice: Firepaw
SnowPelt: A pure white she-cat with green eyes
RedBlood: A red tabby tom with brown eyes
Apprentice: Crimsonpaw
Bluefire: A blue she-cat with Green eyes

Apprentices:
Firepaw: A orange and yellow tabby she-cat with green eyes
Crimsonpaw: A reddish tom

Queens:
MoonFall: A silver and white she-cat with purple eyes, Ashstars sister, Expecting Pantherleaps kits

Elders:
OakTip: Very old orange tom with green eyes


LightningClan
Leader: Clovestar: Yellow she-cat
Medicine Cat: Mallowpool: A fluffy brown she-cat
Medicine Cat Apprentice: Lavenderpaw: A she-cat with thick hair, siamese cat
Deputy: Rustthroat: A red, yellow and orange tom
Warriors:
Adderstorm: A red tom, Rusts brother
Lightspark: A white tom, with a pastel yellow paw
Leafface: A brown tabby tom
KestrelTalon: A brown, black and white she-cat
SunnyLeap: A plae yellow she-cat
Fogsneeze: A grey tom
Phesantneck: A black and brown tabby she-cat
Elders:
Birchwing: Light brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Whitefall: White she-cat





Prologue
Screeching, screeching everywhere. Death, dead cats everywhere. "Retreat!" A grey tom yowled. A wolf ran after the grey tom, as he turned to flee. It grabbed him by the tail and threw him down a cliff. "Stoneteller!!!" A cat screeched. Many more screeches followed that one cat. 'We have to get out of here! a golden and black" she-cat yelped. "Okay! Lets go Burning Leaves! Lead the way". A black tom ran out into the clearing,"Stoneteller is dead!" After many gasp, Burning Leaves pipped up,"Lets go!" Many cats flooded out of the dens. Burning Leaves Was the first out,"Lets go. Never to come back. TO THIS TERRIBLE PLACE!"

New update!


Chapter 1
Mallowpool checked her herb store in the back of her den. Hey, Mallowpool? Yes Cloverstar? the brown she-cat turned around the see her leader. I have come for advice. Cloverstar sat down making herself comfotable. This is going to be long. What is it? Mallowpool sat down. Here it goes, I think Lightspark has a crush on me, but I need help opening up to him! Cloverstar talked so fast, Mallowpool could hardly hear her. Why would you come to me for that? Does she know what I have done? I dont know, I cant ask anyone else, so I came here.. The pastel yellow she-cat told her medicine cat. I am pretty wise.. Mallowpool joked, Ask if he want to share a piece of fresh-kill, then open up to him. Mallowpools ears pricked. She walked out into the clearing and saw a golden and black she-cat limp into camp. As soon as the she-cat made it into camp, she collapsed on the pine-needle filled ground. Does she know we are here? Cloverstar, do you know who this is? Rustthroat asked. No, never seen her. Cloverstar admitted. I dont know either. Lavenderpaw told her deputy. Neither have I. Mallowpool echoed her apprentice. Never seen her Warriors started echoing each other. Fogsneeze walked up to her and prodded her with paw softly,She is alseep, give her some space. he sat beside the strange she-cat.


Mallowpool sat beside the she-cat, seeing to her wounds. Deep scratches, deep bite marks, and a broken back paw.. she mummered to herself. The she-cat began to stir. Mallowpool, Lavenderpaw, and Fogsneeze backed up to give her some room.W-where am I-I..? she spoke. You are in LightningClan.. Fogsneeze spoke spoftly. What is your name? The golden sleek cat looked at him for a second, then spoke,I am Burning Leaves in the Sun.

(Psst. Just sayin, having the prefixes "Moon-" "Star-" and "Sun-" aren't allowed in the Warriors world. You could argue Sunstar and Moonflower, but that was one book and mistakes happen.
Just to let you know.)

So, are you writing fanfiction or your own original work? I'm a bit confused here.

(Yeah, I know, but in what I am making, they don't have that rule, they have the StarTree where they receive nine lives and where the medicine cat's share tongues with StarClan)


I am making my own work, but with the warriors idea

Oh, okay.

Great work so far!

Sorry for no quotes.... when I pasted it it did that.