Only because you asked. First, I fixed the grammar in this line for you. It was really bugging me.
"Offering neither one final kiss nor embrace"

Now the poem itself. Please remember that this is only my opinion.

The poem is... flowery. It has a fantastical setting but I have a hard time figuring out whether you mean for her to be taking her own life, simply leaving a ball, party hopping through several balls, or getting wicked high. I prefer the latter option because that would explain the inconsistent narration and over the top imagery.

If it is supposed to represent some other subject matter then you have more of a problem. The narration hard to follow and the metaphors don't mesh with one another. It seems to me as if you just thought of a bunch of nice things and threw them together. Why is the narrator seeing these things? The poem doesn't say so whatever message the poem is trying to convey is buried beneath nonsense and wet horses surrounded by flowers.

My recommendation is that you think first and foremost about the message that you want to get across to the reader. What do you want the reader to be thinking and feeling when they read your poem? Keep your goal in mind with each sentence you write. Second, less is more. What does each phrase add to the poem as a whole? Does it contain a necessary part of the narration? A metaphor for the character's emotional state? Did you just throw it in because it sounded cool and poetic? Simplify things and use metaphors and imagery that explain the poem. Not throw the meaning into question.

Edited to fix spelling errors made because I was typing on my phone.

Thank you! This was exactly the kind of criticism I was wanting. And to be very honest, this helps me out a lot.