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Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=26850&page=1#3 Author: Firekat2004 Time Posted: 7/1/2015 at 2:58 PM My short story is called "This is a short story" Once upon a there was a girl who loved writing and playing video games.She wrote a short story.Here is her short story...My short story is called "This is a short story" Once upon a there was a girl who loved writing and playing video games.She wrote a short story.Here is her short story...My short story is called "This is a short story" Once upon a there was a girl who loved writing and playing video games.She wrote a short story.Here is her short story...My short story is called "This is a short story" Once upon a there was a girl who loved writing and playing video games.She wrote a short story.Here is her short story...My short story is called "This is a short story" Once upon a there was a girl who loved writing and playing video games.She wrote a short story.Here is her short story...My short story is called "This is a short story" Once upon a there was a girl who loved writing and playing video games.She wrote a short story.Here is her short story...and you get it XD

Is your story a poem? It sounds like an interesting story...


Edit:

Nevermind, I understand! XD

it was a joke XD

I like it.