What type of critique would you like? ^^ It would help to know more about the character. c:
Dovahlion
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Posted: 4/18/2015 at 4:29 AM
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0__0 well then, it's actually Benny the spaceman from the Lego movie. not actually my character but this is what i think he would look like i an AU.any kind of feedback is awesome! =^__^=
Taptothebeat
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Posted: 4/20/2015 at 5:04 PM
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Alright~
- It's hard to see the connection between the different segments of pictures but I like each individual one.
- The one in the top right is easily recognizable, and would be pretty awesome for a logo or the like.
- The one in the bottom right reminds me of saturn but at the same time reminds me of a devils tail. If that is not what you were going for, I'd be a bit careful with the shape.
- I'm not actually sure what the middle drawing is to be, my guess is part of a spaceship. TToTT I like the color scheme though. :) It leaves a happy feeling. Your choice of colors in general are pleasing.
- For the one on the left, I'm not sure what paint program you are using, but it might be good to find one with layer functionality. With layers you can avoid having the little white dots which distract from the drawing. I like how you didn't just take the character directly, but rather created something unique based on inspiration of the character.
Hope that helps. c:
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Posted: 4/21/2015 at 3:42 AM
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thanks so much! and i used deviantart muro for it, cause i don't have any art programs on my laptop.
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Posted: 4/21/2015 at 6:11 PM
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No problem! Here is an online art program that has layer functionality: http://www.sumopaint.com/home/#app The name is really weird lol, but pretty good for an online drawing app.
Dovahlion
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Posted: 4/23/2015 at 2:50 AM
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uhh yeah....i tried it and it was way to laggy for me.thanks for the suggestion though! ehehe.......................
Taptothebeat
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Posted: 4/23/2015 at 12:25 PM
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That's odd. o: I've never heard of anyone having lag with that site before. Perhaps there is something on your computer causing it to lag. D:
Sorry I couldn't help. >.<
Edited By Taptothebeat on 4/23/2015 at 12:26 PM.
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