Hello! This is a story about my Zolnixi, Luna, and how he saves his old tribe, Feather Tribe!
Feather Tribe
The sun shone on a blue zolnixi. As he closed his eyes to take in the beautiful scene before him, until a yellow zolnixi jumped up on him.
Hey! Luna, Luna! Guess what! Luna jumped up, spun in the air, and the yellow zolnixi came off his back.
What?
Whoa, that was awesome. Anyway, I got... you a new set of armor! tada! she said, holding some armor in her mouth.
Really, Clifver? Armor. Just put it with Lover.
But, I thought you would be more surprised to see this armor. I-I made it myself... Clifver began to walk away, sulking. Luna looked at her, and when guilt finally over took him, he said;
No, no! I am surprised! I like that you made it yourself. Really creative! Really nice... While they where talking, a blue morkko ran towards them.
Hey! Luna, some Lupora needs you. She says you could help her tribe with some war over these 'Bloodhounds' or something. I dunno, but she said it was important. Luna's eyes widened in fear, and he rushed towards the valley.
***
Jasmin? You said you needed me? A brown Lupora with massive dragon wings and beautiful celestial armor looked at Luna, and told him; Yes. Luna, the Bloodhound tribe is attacking. We need you to help us. Will you?
Luna thought for a while. I know I should help the tribe that has helped me live and raised me, but I can't just leave everyone. Lover would surly worry, and I don't want search parties to find and destroy the tribes.
After a long pause, Luna told her, I will. Just let me say good-bye to everyone, ok? and then he left.
***
Hey, everyone-
Luna! Your back! What did you find.
I need to talk to everyone. I have to leave on an adventure. I will be back, but I'll be gone for a while. Just make sure our owner doesn't go looking for me, ok?
Of course, Luna, but where are you going? How many supplies do you need? A white sylvorpa with purple stripes walked over to a leather bag, and put some mushrooms, potions, relics and more in the bag.
I'm going back to my home. I need to save them, and you always know what to pack me, Slonime. Luna took the bag from Slonime and began to go to his tribe.
***
The journey took longer than he expected, and was filled with obstacles. Although he found many fairy mushrooms, he found many challengers. Everywhere he turned was battle after battle, he felt like it would never come to an end. Then, as he was nearing the tribe, a red-black Lupora with bone armor jumped in front of him, and clawed his snout.
Who are you! What are you doing here, zolnixi? As Luna was thinking of what to do next, he realized that this Lupora looked familiar. He's Bloodshade! The bloodhound's deputy! As he was thinking, Bloodshade tackled him and barked, I said, tell me your name! Luna rolled over, and kicked Bloodshade off him.
I'm Luna! How dare you attack my tribe! He shouted, charging at Bloodshade. He dodged, but Luna swiftly turned and scratched his side. Bloodshade barked in pain, but pinned Luna down, ranked his snout, and said, This is your last breath. Any last words?
Yeah. Behind you. Bloodshade gave him a puzzled look, turned around, and was ambushed by a group of Luporas.
You may have won this round, but the bloodhound tribe is far from over with you and your little tribe. Jackal, Maned, lets go! The three bloodhounds ran off, and the other Luporas ran to Luna.
Hey! Luna, where have you been! the yellow Lupora lively said.
Yeah! Ever since you left and Hvity died, the bloodhounds have been attacking us on every corner. No-one is safe, not even the pups! a purple one said.
They didn't dare kill them, did they?
No, not the younger ones, they're raising them in there camp. The older ones are the ones they kill. the last one, a brown one, said. Luna's eyes widened in fear.
Bana, Jewel, Vrypluxi, I'm sorry. If Id known this would happen, I would have stayed!
Luna, no-one saw this coming. Not even the star-watcher. Jewel said.
Oh... Wait, why does Bana have a collar? Why don't you two?
Luna said, looking at the spiked collar with a chain on it.
That's because he got caught by the guards. We had to save him.
Ok. How's the tribe? Jewel looked at Bana and Vrypluxi sadly, and told him, I think you should see it for your self. They took Luna to the tribe entrance. He gasp, looking at the tribe in shock.
What have they done?"
That's all so far! :3
Here are the characters:
Luna:
He is calm, intelligent, and confident, and will always be there for his friends and his tribe.
Bloodshade:
He is the Bloodhound Tribe's deputy, and is aggressive.
Jasmin:
Her rank in the Feather Tribe is unknown, but she might have a high rank.
Bana
Luna's friend, probably clumsy and reckless.
Jewel:
Luna's friend.
Vrypluxi:
Luna's friend.
Stream
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Post #2
Sorry to interrupt but.. How do you get the pictures of the sylesti? I've REALLY been wondering how.
Stream
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Sorry to interrupt but.. How do you get the pictures of the sylesti? I've REALLY been wondering how.
Loveroanimals
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Posted: 1/31/2015 at 11:28 AM
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https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=14143 I used this for a little help, but just put the url of the picture in these : [ img ] [ /img ]
Stream
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Ohhh okay thankies! ( I figured it out thx :D)
Loveroanimals
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Chapter 1
As Luna looked at the barren camp, Jewel walked in, swiftly entering a small cave.
"Hey, guys, quick! In here!" The three boys entered the cave, just as Jewel did.
"Why are we in here, Jewel?" but just before Jewel could respond, a new voice called, sending a chill down Luna's spine.
"Yes, indeed, Jewel, why did you bring that traitor in here?" A beautiful fealora with ghostly auras and a flowery headdress said coldly.
"Oh, Miss. Fre! No, this is Luna. Don't you remember? You used to talk about him a lot." Fre stepped closer, and gasped.
"So it is. It's been a long time, Luna. I- I mean we thought you were dead. Where have you been?"
"I live with a human now, and other sylesties. The human takes care of me, and the sylesties are my best friends." He told her.
"Oh, I see..." she backed away some and put her head down, almost as if she was sad. But she took a deep breath, and said, "Very well, then. But, as you can see, our tribe is in very deep danger. We need you to help us protect it?" She asked, looking at the tribe.
He thought for a moment.
"Sure! That's why I can here in the first place!" He said, "What do we do now?"
Jewel climbed out of the cave, and ounce she was out, she called to the boys, "Hey, come on, slow pokes! We need to take care of this tribe!"
Luna follows Jewel out of the cave with the two boys behind them. Fre was leading them to help the tribe, she knew that Luna's heart rested here, this was him home, and she knew he would do anything to help. She looked back to see if Luna and his friends were following her.
"We are right with you Fre, so whats been going on in the tribe since I left?" Luna asked.
"Well, as you can tell, we are being attacked by the bloodhound tribe, and they have been trying to kill us one by one, or three by three. We can't stop him, not even our leader could do it..." Fre explained, trailing off. Luna knew what happened to the leader. He died trying to save this tribe.
"Oh, it' been very hard for us, Luna. You gotta help." Jewel said, trying to comfort Fre.
"Yes, This tribe might not make it in time. That's why I'm asking you to stop them, Luna." Fre replied, standing up.
"We will do whatever it takes to keep them out of our tribe!" Luna smiled, standing proud.
"Yes, Luna was the best warrior back in the old days, and I bet he still knows a few moves!" Jewel cheered.
"Right. I we're counting on you, Luna. Please, help us." Fre looked at Luna, hope in her eyes.
"I promise." Luna said, and followed Jewel to a bush.
Fre smiled, she knew that she could count on Luna. After all, she did like him. She walked back into the cave, giveing the four travlers one last look.
***
Luna looked at the all the Lupora's of the bloodhound tribe patroled the camp, their deep, red eyes gliming like blood throught the eye holes of their helmets.
"So, what shall we do?" Luna asked, turnign over to Jewel.
"I dunno. Ask Vrypluxi." Luna turned to the battle scared Lupora, waiting for his reply.
"We kill the leader." The three gasped at what he said.
"But, that's to dangerous! Why should we?" Vrypluxi walked out of the bush, and said,
"We have fallen when our leader died, and so will they. Luna," He turned to him, "Can you show us where to train? I know that ever since you left, the tibe has made us gaurds, but we barely got to train. Can you help us?" Luna nodded, and lead them to Viridian Meadows.
Miss Fre.
So this is short, but I want to contiue this in a new chapter.
So, where I am in the story, I feel like I can't continue it. So, I am asking for you help.
I would like it if you gave me a paragraph or a few sentences to get me farther in the story, but you can do anything your mind can think of to inspire and help me. You can also request for your characters to be in the story! I just need some help, for I have a huge writer's block, an everything I try to do doesn't help. But, you can try to help. Thank you.
Banzai
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Luna follows Jewel out of the cave with the two boys behind them. Fre was leading them to her tribe, she looked back to see if Luna and his friends were following her.
"We are right with you Fre, so whats going on in the tribe of yours?" Luna asked.
"Well, they are being attacked by some humans that came by not so long ago. They just attacked us yesterday and I fear that I won't be able to stop them, not even our leader can do it..." Fre explained.
"Oh, it must be hard." Jewel sensed her pain.
"Yes, my tribe might not make it in time. That's why I'm asking you all to stop them." Fre replied.
"We will do whatever it takes to keep them out of your tribe!" Luna smiled.
"Yes, Luna and I can grab some of our tribe to help you." Jewel agreed.
"Right. If you do go, you need to hurry back." Fre nodded.
"We will!" Luna and Jewel both responded.
Fre smiled, she knew that she could count on them.
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How is that? I really didn't know how to continue from where you left off, but I hope this page is good:3
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Thank you! I'll tweak it a little so that it will have some of my ideas of the story in it, but thanks! :3
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You're welcome:3
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