can i please ask for some feedback on these?
Mummified ryori~

without skull mask ~

skeletal ryori~
without skull mask~

gargoyle luffox~
not exactly the BRIGHTEST thing in the world but halloween is supposed to be dark and spooky.including the fact that halloween comes from the saying all hallow's eve where spirits roam free and gargoyle are also known as deamons in some cultures.

swamp monster kelpari~


fairy OR alternativly speaking Dark fairy bubori
lightside
or dark fairy ~

harvest pixie nephinni~


banshee lupora~


haunted tree faelora~



vodoo doctor puffador ~


gargoyle nyvene


will-o-the-wisp ryori~

Your designs look like they have some really nice colors, but you might want to show some variation on each one, since we can't see all the color slots and whether or not they all look good.

Keep in mind when creating your designs that they will theoretically become themed pets, which means they will be available in every trait combination possible, but more commonly, with no traits at all, so the base colors should looks nice too.

well here is the will-o-the-wisp ryori with different mutations/genes base color,and regular
will-o-the-wisp ryori~


base color~
different genes and mutations~

Love the Mummified Ryori. The main problem I have with the Skeletal Ryori is the name. Reason being, if it doesn't have the Skeletal mutations, the name won't fit very well. As for the Will-O-Wisp Ryori, try using some yellows, purples, or oranges somewhere.

Looks good.

(I mostly meant for your post in the contest thread, that you should show some variation, it'll give the admins a better idea of what your design would look like if they chose it.)

And I disagree with Psalm, the Ryori looks fine as it is, I think adding other colors would make it not look like a wisp anymore.
(I don't know about you, but my mental image of a wisp is pure blue thanks to the movie Brave.)

Edit: Though I also agree with Psalm that the Skeletal Ryori needs a different name, since without the mutations it wouldn't make any sense.

thats actually where i got the idea for the wisp ^.^

but for the skeletal ryori..yes i see it now it would not make sense at all.how would graveyar ryori or bonekeeper ryori work?

Hah, same.


Uh... How about something like Vampire Ryori? Since the black/red/white combo reminds me of vampires personally.

makes sense

I already have a design by that name, but Vampiric Ryori would work.

Eh, names aren't a big deal. I'm pretty sure there's a lot of overlap, there usually is.

But yeah, Vampiric Ryori sounds cool.