Glitch saw the fear in the girl's eyes so she crouched down to her level to make herself seem less threatening.
"Hey there, kid. You okay?"

(Okay, so stream or Ice, which ever is just doing what ever anyone else is doing becuase I dont have internet at my house and until I do I can not activly roleplay.I hope everyone understands)

Snowfall*she stared at the one who was eye leveled to me for abit;after abit I got alittle confortable to talk*...I...I-I'm f-fine...*her voice was soft,small,and shy*

Pine lowered himself to the ground. He noticed she was a skinny.

'Are you hungry? We have some food if you like. ' He said smiling.

He looked back. Noticing Agana and Ceres where still in the back. And they didn't seem happy with eachother.

(@Sena,
Just a bit of advice: You should write in this RP like how you would write a story. So none of this *** okay?
Also, you seemed to switch from first to third person. Try to keep it third person, so you're not the character but you're telling their story.

Eg. Snowfall stared at the one who was eye level to her for a bit. After a bit she got a little comfortable to talk.
"... I... I-I'm f-fine..."
Her voice was soft, small and shy.

Sorry if I sound pushy but it makes it easier for others to understand that way.

@Jayfeather451,
No problem, we know she's still tagging along with the rest of them.)

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Glitch smiled at her. "Are you sure you're okay? You seem a bit lost, dear. What's your name?"

(Im sorry...I was just taught how to rp that way...also I'm no good at those big paragraph rp things...)
Snowfall*she looked at the second one then thr first one*U-Um...M-My name is S-Snowfall...a...and...i-if it's not a p-problem...c-can I have s-some...*the last few words came out like a mumble;she shrank back abit even as she was skinny*

Sena, another small thing.

You don't have to typ snowfall everytime. We know you play snowfall so you don't need to type her name.

And like Rjay said dont use the * but use "

Example
you: Snowfall*she looked at the second one then thr first one*U-Um...M-My name is S-Snowfall...a...and...i-if it's not a p-problem...c-can I have s-some...*the last few words came out like a mumble;she shrank back abit even as she was skinny*

How this ro does it:

She looked at the second one then the first one.

'U-Um...M-My name is S-Snowfall...a...and...i-if it's not a p-problem...c-can I have s-some...'

The last few words came out like a mumble, she shrank back a bit even as she was skinny.


Do you see the difference?
-No name (snowfall)
- Only put what your character says between marks ''
- What you describe your character doing/seeing can be done withoud marks

and if you want to say something as sena you do so with () but you already did that

It is ok you didn't get it right, right away. Your way is not wrong, it just is wrong for this rp. It is better for everyone if everybody rp's the same way. That way nobody gets confused. You understand?

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Pine smiled and took a bit of food they have with them, and gave it to Snow.

'There you go, enjoy.'

He looked back. Val and Ice where talking to eachother about something. And Agana and Ceres where still in the back.

'Hey Agana, Ceres, are you guys comming?'

"Yes, I'm coming" she said looking away at Agana and holding her head up high.

(I understand it's just hard. Being taught one way for so long then having to switch to another after adapting to the way you usualy would. Hey if you don't like it you can kick me out.Fairly simple.I've had it done many times.I can't stand abunch of details or long posts and critics bug me for many reasons. Heck I can't stand humanities for the critic reason.They make fun of my poor writing skills and my pendminship.They get mad at me for drawing and critisise my grammer and spelling.)
Snowfall*she loked at the food and hesitently took a small bite of it*

No need to act so defensive. Everybody in this rp has to type in the same way. We told other rp'ers who rp'd in a different way that as well.

This is purely so it is easyer to read and follow for everybody, it is nothing personal. (we would tell any new person who types different this, we have so far, your no exception)

We understand if it's hard. But you have to at least try. We don't care about grammar or spelling much. Your free to rp half a page or only 1 word.

All in all we are not very strickt.

The only rules are the ones explained earlyer. Again it is nothing personal. Everybody had too, we can not make exceptions just because you don't like it.

Rp is a team/group thing. Same rules apply to all. If you don't like that your free to leave. We will not kick you out. We like having new players. But we will point it out if a player does something that doesn't fit in this rp so they can change it. We will simply show you what you have to change with examples, like we would with everybody else. No special treatment. No attack either. Just an explenation.

What you said in the above quote does not apply to us. We will not kick anybody out just becouse we ''don't like'' it. It has nothing to do with like or not like. It is not that we don't like your style. Again there is nothing wrong with your rp style It just isn't the one used in this rp.

It could be the commen way in another rp though, where everybody has to type it that way.

But in this rp, everybody has to type it the same way.
You can either try to type it in that way, or you can leave on your own free will.

Know that we would love to have you stay and are willing to help you adapt to the for you new style in any way we can. If you have questions you can contact either of us ( us being me and Rjay) always!