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Rashomon
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 3:28 PM
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Well, I need to have all of my Summer Fest designs in one place. And two, to get design critiques so that I can get better at designing. I'm fairly new to designing - with the Spring Fest being the first time I ever actually submitted a design. Probably because I joined in February.
If you're going to give critiques, then I'd like to ask you to
(You don't have to do these if you don't want to)
- Name the design you're critiquing so I know which one you're talking about
- Rate the design on a scale of 1-10...or poor to excellent
- And of course, tell me what you'd change and what you like.
Rashomon
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 3:29 PM
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~Summer Night Aeri~
~Cloudy Summer Sunrise Aurl~
~Daisy Bulbori~
~Bonfire Draeyl~
~Strawberry Faelora~
~Stormy Sea Ferrikki~
~Crystallized Sunset Griffi~
~Blazing Barbecue Kelpari~
~Flowing River Lighira~
Luffox
~Toasted Marshmallow Lunemara~
~Summer Hike Lupora~
Morkko
~Summer Romance Nephini~
~Rose Petal Ny'Vene~
Nytekrie
~IT'z Summer Puffadore~
Reference
~Strawberry Blast Qitari~
~Berry Blast Ryori~
Sylvorpa
~Bioluminescent Vulnyx~
~Mariana Trench Zolnixi~
Edited By Stryker666 on 8/6/2020 at 4:29 PM.
Auria
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Posted: 7/9/2020 at 10:37 PM
Post #3
My personal opinion is weird because I'm an art student....so feel free to ignore me! XD
Summer Night Aeri | 9
I really like the pinky reds and yellow with the dark red. I might suggest adding in a dark green to complement the reds. Something like this:
Before _______________________________ After
Overall I really like this one, and it probably could win. ^-^
Cloudy Summer Sunrise Aurl | 6
I absolutely loved the shade of blue you used! It's my favorite. I think you might want to choose between pink and purple. I wouldn't use both in your design. I made some changes to it based on colors in the design already. (Changed shades, moved colors around) I'm not sure if it's better or not, but here it is:
Before _______________________________ After
Overall it's a decent concept, but it's not my favorite. Good job on the pretty concept though!
Daisy Bulb | 7
I don't really see anything wrong with this one. It's pretty cute. I like how the main color is a very light grey and the pink is a very nice shade. ^-^ The only thing I could think to suggest is to maybe make the green darker...but it's not really necessary.
Overall: I didn't rate it as high because of personal preference. I prefer light colors when paired with a darker color or two, but not counting my preference is rate it maybe a 8-9.
Edited By Auria on 7/10/2020 at 12:06 PM.
Rashomon
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Posted: 7/10/2020 at 11:47 AM
Post #4
Ok, thanks for the feedback. I'm not a fan of the Bulb either :/
Auria
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Posted: 7/10/2020 at 12:05 PM
Post #5
^-^' I wouldn't mind being able to add it to my collection.
(I posted 10 designs on mine.... If you want you can take a look ;)
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Posted: 7/10/2020 at 12:05 PM
Post #6
Yeah, I saw :)
Rashomon
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Posted: 7/14/2020 at 11:34 AM
Post #7
Hey, I updated my designs :P
Auria
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Posted: 7/15/2020 at 2:24 PM
Post #8
Ooh nice!! The female bulb is soooo cute!!! And I really like the draes you added
Rashomon
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Posted: 7/15/2020 at 4:06 PM
Post #9
Thank you Auri!! :) The Draeyls came out of nowhere, I was listening to a song about fire and got inspired hehe
