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Cranberry
Level 60
Holiday Caroler
Joined: 4/16/2013
Threads: 20
Posts: 418
Posted: 11/10/2013 at 9:50 PM
Post #11
Hydrys- Lol. Not only is your poem really good, but it has the added advantage of being true.
Ember2000- thank you for your help ^^
Night- And that's why haikus are so hard; to capture meaning in brevity and style.
Pepper- Poems aren't just a series of broken sentences slapped down in a couple minutes. Poems are songs without music. Poems are a way of saying something without saying it, a way of enhancing the meaning by putting a rhythm to it, a rhyme, a structure. There are some beautiful and well thought out free verse poems out there; Walt Whitman, or e.e.cummings; but they both put a lot of time and thought into their poems. Free verse has taken a beating by people thinking that the free form means no work needs to be involved. And there is a good solid place in literature for free verse, but you should learn how to do the others first. You can't do a good freestyle dance until you learn how to move to the rhythm first. And its the same with words.
Marsandin
Level 75
The Jolly
Joined: 1/19/2013
Threads: 20
Posts: 1,762
Posted: 11/11/2013 at 4:51 PM
Post #12
First Time On
I've started the game.
I've chosen my name.
I'm off to new places.
I'll see new faces.
I've created my pet,
And have items to get.
My chores are all done,
So I'm ready for fun.
Exploring and talking.
Capturing pets while walking.
My stables are filling,
But I am more than willing,
The game has begun.
Won't stop even if number one.
Mero
Level 60
The Whimsical
Joined: 9/30/2013
Threads: 12
Posts: 695
Posted: 11/16/2013 at 10:41 AM
Post #13
Sylestia I stare at my computer and wonder if I should...
I make up my mind and say I guess I'm in the mood
I prepare my sylesties for battle as I usually would
I beat my enemies and move on, not wanting to be rude
I dress up my avatar and also nurture pets
I win prizes and buy nets
I take care of and breed
I help people and make continues deeds
I make friends and wish luck on their end
I always have happiness and love to lend
I play when I can, glad to not be banned
I whisper Sylestia is an amazing game
I love even its name!
I stare at my computer and wonder if I should....
I make up my mind and say I guess I'm in the mood
Time moves on as I play, but this feeling will always stay the same
I promise I love Krinadon and Faiona for creating this game.
I log in Sylestia and say," Here I come again!"
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