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Articu
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 4/20/2016
Threads: 146
Posts: 1,782
Posted: 9/18/2019 at 1:04 PM
Post #921
song name: lithium
band: evanescence
link: music video
lyrics:
"i can't hold on to me
wonder what's wrong with me
lithium, don't want to lock me up inside
lithium, don't want to forget how it feels without
lithium, i want to stay in love with my sorrow"
it's a depressing song, just like basically every other song i listen to :') so i tried echoing the theme of sadness, and feeling chained to it yet not wanting to let it go
with critique:
o~o~o~o~o~o
@liz512
i think it is a very good design. the violet and yellow goes very nice together. however, i think it should be toned down a bit, and with a trait change to show off that "i'm my own person, i do things my way, etc." theme (i also dulled down the colors and changed a few to give it a touch more of the stormy appearance, given the thunder and lightning references ;P). but otherwise, it is a very unique design, and it certainly echoes the theme of uniqueness :)
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Edited By Articu on 9/19/2019 at 6:33 AM.
Duckbunny427
Level 69
Nature Walker
Joined: 3/12/2019
Threads: 66
Posts: 1,632
Posted: 9/18/2019 at 3:57 PM
Post #922
"Little Talks" by Of Monsters and Men
(How long ago was it that this song took over the radio?)
'Cause though the truth may vary
This ship will carry our bodies safe to shore, Hey!
Don't listen to a word I say! Hey!
The screams all sound the same, Hey!
Though the truth may vary
This ship will carry our bodies safe to shore
Link to very weird music video
With Critique:
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Critique:
The design is very good. All I did was darkened the colors and changed the wings to the Crystal Ice Wings. i feel like for such a sad song, dark colors are a good idea. For the wings I just personally thought they looked cooler. I think maybe less lighter blues and more grays and navy blues
Edited By Duckbunny427 on 9/19/2019 at 7:11 PM.
Freki
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 7/29/2018
Threads: 14
Posts: 927
Posted: 9/18/2019 at 4:29 PM
Post #923
Defying Gravity, by Steven Schwartz
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf9Bt5WFZKs
And if Im flying solo
At least Im flying free!
To those who ground me
Take a message back for me...
Revised:
Critique:
I like your design, however, I feel the red is a little out of place. I would suggest adding another mutation with the red in it to make it less jarring. Either that, or you could just change the red to something else.
Edited By Freki on 9/20/2019 at 2:38 PM.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 9/19/2019 at 6:02 PM
Post #924
Please add more depth to your critique in order to get accepted
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 9/19/2019 at 6:03 PM
Post #925
Please combine your posts and add in a little bit more depth too your critique
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 9/19/2019 at 6:08 PM
Post #926
-- Current Entries --
Link to current challenge. Sairento
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After Critique
Articu
Before Critique
After Critique
Freki
Before Critique
After Critique
Duckbunny427
Before Critique
After Critique
Koterfaye
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Sunriseland
Before Critique
Edited By Limor on 9/22/2019 at 4:52 PM.
Rileyy
Level 75
High Druid
Joined: 5/25/2018
Threads: 56
Posts: 1,151
Posted: 9/19/2019 at 8:29 PM
Post #927
Sorry Lim, Im gonna have to opt out of this week. School+Internship+Work=pain and help me lol. If I have time Ill get something up but Im technically opting out. If I end up posting just ignore this ^-^
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 9/19/2019 at 8:41 PM
Post #928
Shoots and Laddersby Korn
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZU2k-U2Ze0o
"Nursery rhymes are said, verses in my head
Into my childhood they're spoon fed
Hidden violence revealed, darkness that seems real
Look at the pages that cause all this evil"
With Critique:
Critique:
Your original design was gorgeous, so I did not change much nor do I have much to say. All I suggest is that you add a little bit more blue, and try to get the colors to blend a bit more to get a more detailed design. Other than that, this design is great, and so was your song choice!
Critique:
Original:
Edited By Koterfaye on 9/20/2019 at 8:04 AM.
Sunflora
Level 71
Ghost Writer
Joined: 6/6/2018
Threads: 10
Posts: 536
Posted: 9/19/2019 at 10:35 PM
Post #929
~Critique~
I really like this design, the colors work very nicely. Though for G3, I think red would be more suited than cream. Also, the wings make it extremely hard to see the skeletal armor so I'd either switch the wings or change the armor. Tribal armor is easily visable while keeping that bony look.
Break My Face AJR
What doesn't kill you...
makes you ugly.
Life gives you lemons.
At least it gave you something.
Akirashadowwolf
Level 54
Snow Wars Combatant
Joined: 10/2/2018
Threads: 39
Posts: 933
Posted: 9/20/2019 at 8:51 AM
Post #930
Within Temptation - Ice Queen
On cold wings she's coming
You better keep moving
For warmth, you'll be longing, nightingale
Come on just feel it
Don't you see it?
You better believe
Critique- I really liked your design and I had a bit of trouble finding things to critique. All I did was darken the blue on color 1 and made color 2 a bit more yellow and less white. I feel like the darker blue adds more contrast to the baby blue and allows it to be a bit more visible. The yellow really brings out the pattern of the valentine lace so it's not quite so hidden.
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