Ahaha, thanks. I just made it. I never copy and paste these stories. I guess I try and make them the most exciting I can! I mean I am into creepypastas and they can get very good with their writing! I think I'm pretty good for being an almost 13 year old. :) Hope you enjoy the egg!

You're not even 13 yet?! Ah, you make me feel old. -_-; But still, you are very good, and yes, I've seen some creepypastas that were very good. Your writing on the fly is really good, especially for being so young!

Thanks, I feel like I could do better though hahaha.
( Coal; the blackness of lonely shadows forming together to make this heartless and emotionless object...if it could be alive that'd be it's only wish it's right now burning in the opal orange embers of hate, the hate becomes something more powerful leaving the pinewood cabin filled with meaning as the family unwraps the suspires the spend so much time and love on.) Just a quick paragraph! sorry.
*I edited it because of a typo*

It's still really good though. The best advice I can give is to just read it aloud you yourself, see where you might need to start a new sentence, or where to pause with a comma. I like to write as well and have found that reading it aloud helps me to find where I need to change or fix things. Also, pay attention to spelling, when things are misspelled, it can make things confusing, because the reader has to figure out what the misspelled word is. Other than that, just keep writing what you know and like to write. :)

Thank you :)

No problem. :)

mint chocolate

You eat the chocolate to find that there is an egg inside!
You look at your new egg but it feels cold. You place it carefully in your warm bag with your other hatchling.
Suddenly a cold wind blows. You think a storm is coming you think you yourself. "Let's go back," you say out loud suddenly a Puffadoor knocks you over. when you get up your egg is on a pile of leaves. You spet in the leaves to grab you the prize you have received but- the pile of leaves was a trap! You grab your egg while you fall down into a cave. Everything goes black.
When you wake up you're on the tops of mushrooms... huh wait? You sneeze. You start to feel itchy all over. " I am allergic to these mushrooms?" you think you yourself. You get out of the patch of mushrooms and see a sign that says "WARNING; SUPER SPICEY SUGAR MUSHROOMS VERY POISONOUS TO EAT. DO NOT TOUCH!"
You head home and hit your bed... and the books. Maybe you can get a cure for this Rash at the library?
You also wake up to see that there's a stick that is stuck in your hair and you can't get it out! You might need to see the hairdresser!
https://www.sylestia.com/view/pets/?petid=4505646

Deep dark raspberry chocolate

I go to the library to try to find the cure