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Sslover
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Posted: 1/19/2018 at 7:13 PM
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My iPad doesnt allow quotation marks on here so I use bold text, and I will work on the paragraphs as soon as Im finished with this small section. Thank you for your feedback
MistressNyx
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Posted: 2/2/2018 at 11:39 PM
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I jumps around a bit and is a little bit hard to follow. Other than that, keep going!
Sslover
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Posted: 2/17/2018 at 11:17 AM
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Thank you!
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