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Forum Index > Other Fiction > I will help ANYONE with a story
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Dracornpotato
Level 68
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/11/2016
Threads: 39
Posts: 1,014
Posted: 4/25/2017 at 3:01 PM Post #11
That was very good. Really mysterious. I didn't see anything truly wrong with it. IT WAS REALLY DESCRIPTIVE. I LOVED THAT. I could practically SEE what was happening. So, yeah. Really good. Don't really need to change anything. WAIT. Although, there were some places with consistent dialogue. Like,
"I don't remember! Its been a while, to long for me to recall!"
"Then you should get to remembering them shouldnt you?"
"I do recall one being a blacksmith, in-in the next town? Yes that was her! The kanin with the blacksmiths shop in the next town! Please just don't hurt me." Mals eyes narrowed slightly right before he released the marsvin.
"A kanin you say?" Mal said pulling a tuft of black hair out from in between his claws. "Do say more. "
"Thats all I know! I swear! I sold her all the pieces, if anyone had it then it's her! "
"For some reason I don't think I can believe you, maybe it's the fact that you lied to me once before."

Its not that they talk to much, its only that they are practically yelling back and forth at each other. Add some
"he said angrily" or "with a bit of tension in his voice."

Overall it was great.
Aquari
Level 70
The Majestic
Joined: 4/17/2014
Threads: 79
Posts: 1,923
Posted: 7/13/2017 at 10:46 PM Post #12
Hay I'm working on a story line for a form game I may need some help. I will pm you the story line (so there won't be any spoilers running around) I have tomorrow. The game Idea is in the link below

https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=48992&page=1#2

XD you see my problem is I start writing but I never finish *cough* I have SEVERAL unfinished stories!
Dracornpotato
Level 68
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/11/2016
Threads: 39
Posts: 1,014
Posted: 7/15/2017 at 4:31 PM Post #13
Alright! I'll check it out. Just going to let you know right now, I cannot help you with a FULL story saying that I am currently writing one with someone who agreed to the terms first. But I will try my best to help with this.

I am going to be gone ALL of next week too, so, just a heads up.
Edited By Dracornpotato on 7/15/2017 at 4:32 PM.
Aquari
Level 70
The Majestic
Joined: 4/17/2014
Threads: 79
Posts: 1,923
Posted: 7/15/2017 at 4:38 PM Post #14
Ok I have a lil more storyline I'll pm to you later
Kingdomheartsgeek
Level 22
Joined: 6/26/2017
Threads: 13
Posts: 645
Posted: 7/22/2017 at 9:00 AM Post #15
(sorry, decided not to get help after I posted)
Edited By Kingdomheartsgeek on 7/22/2017 at 9:56 AM.
Xenios
Level 68
The Tender
Joined: 8/3/2016
Threads: 114
Posts: 2,151
Posted: 8/1/2017 at 4:06 PM Post #16
Are you still looking for someone to write with? I just had a super idea but I'm not sure if I'll follow through on my own XD
Anyways, if you are still looking I could tell you about it.
Dracornpotato
Level 68
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/11/2016
Threads: 39
Posts: 1,014
Posted: 8/1/2017 at 5:05 PM Post #17
I would, but yes, I have already found somebody. I am willing to put you on hold, however. If you keep that idea somewhere then I will send you a PM when I am finished with my current one and help you write it!
Foxee223
Level 46
Joined: 4/12/2017
Threads: 25
Posts: 1,510
Posted: 9/6/2017 at 7:06 AM Post #18
is it possible if you can help me?

if you are busy i can wait but i wanted to do a story about some magic stuff (some people with certain magic) and i did come up with characters and their personality but i am not sure how to start off my story and where it should be. and i do not know what kind of story i want for example; romance? adventure? horror? ect.

i did come up with some ideas AND IT WOULD BE AWESOME IF YOU COULD HELP ME

when you are done with helping other ones please ping me and i will give more details about my story that i wrote so far :D and if you cant help i understand
Nafariaandulin
Level 57
Fright Master
Joined: 1/10/2017
Threads: 102
Posts: 3,672
Posted: 9/6/2017 at 11:54 AM Post #19
You PM'd me about wanting me to add to the story No one saw it coming, so I have updated it, just for you! ;)
Shayni
Level 63
Trickster
Joined: 6/2/2017
Threads: 164
Posts: 13,771
Posted: 9/6/2017 at 6:23 PM Post #20
Can you read the first few posts I have written for my story, The Gifted and the Tainted? I know it's not the best, and I need more detail, but can you help by telling me where specifically or if there are any other issues?
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