deathstrike layed at cougar clans border purring

Name: Raven Feather ( the name she has taken to meet Clan customs, but her true name is unknown)

Appearance:
She Is slender and Agile, but heavily muscled, Her eyes Are mainly blue but have flecks of purple in them that show up best at night her tail is slick and whip like. her claws are talon like and are a shinny white that compliment her pearly white canines that are rather large compared to other cats and stick out and look dorky. Her Pelt is mainly black but she has a white chest and underside, her tail is tip'd white, and delicate swirls emerge from her white areas. she had identical white stripes on her cheeks and white freckle like speckles across her nose.

Personality: Intellectual, fun loving and Kind for the most part, though she can get very hot headed and doesn't do well with others disrespecting her or being Arrogant.

Need To Knows: she is a traveler from the far west but is currently in Cougar clan territory. The rules and regulations here seem strange to her and she hasn't really been able to hit it off with any of the other clans yet so she is fending for herself until Cougar clan either rejects her or takes her in. In the west She was known as The Wolf for her fighting style, although she is small she is able to take down enemies bigger than her if necessary. She has Low stamina and tiers quickly. Aside from her wild fighting style she has a knack for mimicry. She has been in the area for less than a month.

i am sory but she is a mary sew and i want no mary sews and did you evean read information and what clan

flame tail one of rabit hops kits and one of the fersisest warriors in the clan whas already leading a hunting ptrol some of the elders say that when he was a apprentice that hr chaough a owl out of the sky

"Yeah.......... I guess." Lightning storm frowned

whats rong lightning storm

also i need a second opinion is the cat above a mery sew

"I don't feel safe........" Lightningstorm admitted. "I want a mate but the birds that circle around worries me......."

Silverpaw stretched as she walked out of the den to look for her mentor.Her shiny silver fur shined in the bright sunlight while she sank her claws into the ground impatiently."Talonflame?" She called."Can we go hunting?" She sat down and frowned."I'll go by myself." She said stubbornly,walking out of the camp with her tail held high.She sniffed the air and scanned the clearing with ice blue eyes.She suddenly spotted a mouse and dropped into a crouch,moving quietly forward towards the soon-to-be prey.

I'm not quite sure how she is a Mary Sue, Its not like she is perfect? And I did read all of the information, I was just wanting to enter from the outside, but if that won't work I can change it, after I edited it I put that she was hoping to Join Cougar Clan