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Aphelion
Level 75
Fright Master
Joined: 5/14/2016
Threads: 113
Posts: 9,837
Posted: 10/6/2021 at 4:31 PM Post #1
Just a thread for me to put in any non-themed projects that I am currently working on or planning to work on.

Any and all feedback is welcome - thoughts, compliments, criticism, anything!

It's always nice to have other perspectives on designs, especially if I think something looks nice but in reality it might not be the most appealing design ^-^ You can PM or post in the thread, I have no specific preference.

Projects (including themed)
& Respective links if it exists
Astral Wanderer Ryo - project thread
Ageless Antiquity (6vis Ryo) - project thread
Final Bloom (6vis Ryo) - project thread
Suspended Twilight (6vis Neph) - project thread
Gilded Antumbra (6vis Ryo) - project thread
Thalassophobia (6vis Ryo) - project thread
Hollow Knight Collection (6vis Ryos) - project thread

Edited By Aphelion on 4/11/2022 at 4:20 PM.
Aphelion
Level 75
Fright Master
Joined: 5/14/2016
Threads: 113
Posts: 9,837
Posted: 10/6/2021 at 4:43 PM Post #2
Ageless Antiquity
6-vis Ryo

Status: Started
Goal: Max stat


Design


G1: Dolphin
G2: Astral Wanderer's Glyphs
G3: Star Runes

M1: Astral Wanderer's Shawl
M2: Astral Wanderer's Orbs
M3: Demonstalker's Horns


Colour Schemes

Ageless Antiquity


Burning Coals


Pastel Lights

Female is a more saturated version

Sunshine Between Clouds



Interest
Darkesse - Preorder for Ageless Antiquity


Edited By Aphelion on 11/26/2021 at 5:42 PM.
Sairento
Level 75
High Priest
Joined: 8/24/2018
Threads: 164
Posts: 7,943
Posted: 10/7/2021 at 5:28 AM Post #3
Hello, hello! Here are some critiques on your designs.
(of course, you don't need to follow them. feel free to change them to your liking)


original ------------ changed
for this one the design is very pretty, but the brown on the horns stands out a bit. if you like it, go for it! its not particularly bad, just seems slightly out of place. maybe dull it a bit. you can also make gene 2 slightly less red but otherwise its fine.



original ------------ changed
i was thinking that for this one the red was a bit too bright and the black a bit too dark. it looks a bit unnatural. changed a few things here and there.


idk, im not an expert. good luck with your prjects!
Incantamentum
Level 75
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 11/25/2020
Threads: 23
Posts: 448
Posted: 10/7/2021 at 7:05 AM Post #4
I can't really suggest any improvements, but I feel like pastel light feels a little too gray. (Also please ping me for the design contest)
Aphelion
Level 75
Fright Master
Joined: 5/14/2016
Threads: 113
Posts: 9,837
Posted: 10/7/2021 at 8:52 AM Post #5
Thank you for the suggestions!

I see what you mean about the horns, I'll soften them. Certain genes are supposed to have a reddish tint because I'm trying to simulate the colour of gold, which usually has red/orange undertones.

For the second one, for the sharp contrast is intentional. I'm trying to create the image of a pile of black coal and char (black and grey) with embers glowing from the cracks in between (the saturated and bright oranges).
Aphelion
Level 75
Fright Master
Joined: 5/14/2016
Threads: 113
Posts: 9,837
Posted: 10/7/2021 at 8:54 AM Post #6
Hmm, I do see that it's a bit grey. Would you suggest I saturate all the colours, or just a select few? I'm thinking of maybe making the base colours (EC, C1, C2, C3) more vibrant.

And another thing- by design contest, do you mean for the astral wanderer ryo one?
Incantamentum
Level 75
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 11/25/2020
Threads: 23
Posts: 448
Posted: 10/7/2021 at 10:15 AM Post #7
Yeah! For the design, maybe saturate some colors so that the pastel ones stand through more?
Aphelion
Level 75
Fright Master
Joined: 5/14/2016
Threads: 113
Posts: 9,837
Posted: 10/7/2021 at 10:47 AM Post #8
Thanks for the feedback ^-^ I've made some changes, although I'm still unsure whether I want to keep the old one or entirely change the design to the new one, so I'll have both of them for the moment.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/9/2021 at 4:02 PM Post #9
Hi!! Here's my somewhat rushed suggestions before work <33


With your first design I suggest brightening up the g2 to around FFC973, this color matches the orbs/eyes more and helps tie it together better- as well as upping the contrast which in my opinion is usually a plus. You could maybe make the c2 a tad darker to 38454D, but this just helps the toes stand out a tad more and isn't a change I think is like, super needed just a suggestion for if you wanted to consider some other ideas :)

For your burning coal design my only suggestion is to make the eyes a yellow-orange around FFBE4F, this helps the eyes stand out more and is a nice pop against all the other more red oranges. Other then that this is a very solid design as well!

-- doing other later, must get ready for work now --
Aphelion
Level 75
Fright Master
Joined: 5/14/2016
Threads: 113
Posts: 9,837
Posted: 11/12/2021 at 9:19 AM Post #10
Final Bloom
6-vis Ryo

Status: Not started
Goal: Max stat


Design
Inspiration


G1: Double Stripes
G2: Petal Markings
G3: Valentine Lace

M1: Glimmering Jewels
M2: Grim Roses
M3: Demonstalker's Horns


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